... Hard to critique! Perhaps you might have changed the focus, to capture more detail of the green in the mountains... but it is hard to say if adding clarity to that would disturb the clarity in the clouds, sky, and field in the foreground... If given another opportunity, (and such moments don't often come twice) perhaps try that. If you can add clarity to the center of the image without losing the same clarity in the top and bottom of the image, it would be perfect!!
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